literature

faces, spaces, places

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allow me to exaggerate a memory or two:
when somebody says your name for the last time,
you let men lay on you
to keep the sleep away.
years go by like one day
here under the north star.
below the canopies,
lost wishes can be found.
cities sleep inside our heads;
I'm only
a quiet sentinel.
the longer I lay here,
the most peculiar of places,
in the space where I can breathe,
I can't explain the feelings I get.
have I run too far to get home?
we are all astronauts in the dead of night.
when a poet's heart breaks,
an end is just another beginning.
This one took a lot more to write,
and it feels more personal inside.

I made the mistake of not copying all the links down
as I went, but it worked out because when I went
back to find them, I ended up replacing/adding a
couple of lines anyway, and then I liked it better.

I don't like the title, though. Suggestions?

Created for #TheTitlePage's contest.
Feedback is my favorite thing in the world. <3


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neonsquiggle's avatar
I love it, I love it.